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lines 3 and 4 should be:
“When her fins became crossed She found herself lost”
for proper limerick meter.
Other from that, well done!
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lines 3 and 4 should be:
“When her fins became crossed
She found herself lost”
for proper limerick meter.
Other from that, well done!